Subject lines that say what's inside
Specific, honest lines with the important words first, because phones cut long subject lines off.
Email Marketing
I write subject lines, preview text and body copy to earn the open and the click. Each email is in plain English and your brand's voice, with one clear next step.
What each line does
Example email
Inbox
Gets recognised
Tells people who this is from. A name they recognise, used the same way every time, gives them a reason to look.
Earns the open
Says what's inside in plain words. Phones cut long lines off, so the important words come first.
Backs up the subject
The line after the subject, adding something it didn't say. Left empty, many inboxes show the first words of the email.
Earns the click
One clear point and one next step, easy to follow when someone skims it on a phone.
Specific, honest lines with the important words first, because phones cut long subject lines off.
A second line that gives a further reason to open. Left empty, many inboxes pull in the first words of the email.
Advice on who the email should come from, using a name your subscribers will know when they scan their inbox.
Short paragraphs, one main point and one clear call to action, easy to follow when someone skims it on a phone.
A few notes on your tone and the words you use, which your team can follow once I've handed over.
Extra subject lines for A/B testing when your list is big enough to learn from, judged on clicks and conversions as well as opens.
Step 1
You tell me who the email is for, what it needs to do and what you've sent before. Reviews, product details and customer questions all help, if you can share them.
Step 2
I write the subject lines, preview text and body copy, with a few subject line options to choose from.
Step 3
You mark up anything that doesn't sound right, and I make the rounds of changes we agreed at the start.
Step 4
I load the copy into your template or hand it to your team, then look at which lines earned the click and use that in the next round.
It depends on what's involved: the number of emails, how much research they need and whether they're part of a longer flow. I'll agree a clear scope and price with you before work begins.
Send me a recent email or two and tell me who they're for, and I'll come back with an honest recommendation and a clear quote.
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